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Life/Death (revised) (Free verse) by devotedwonder

Life Birds chirping Grass growing Babies crying Sun shining The world turning beautiful to breathe air Death Birds silent Grass dead Babies no longer crying Sun blackened The world is dying beautiful to breathe your last breath

<~> 1-Aug-02/8:35 AM
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