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Life/Death (revised)
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Free verse
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devotedwonder
Life Birds chirping Grass growing Babies crying Sun shining The world turning beautiful to breathe air Death Birds silent Grass dead Babies no longer crying Sun blackened The world is dying beautiful to breathe your last breath
razorgrin
1-Aug-02/8:31 AM
GODDAMN YOU TO THE DEEPEST CIRCLE OF HELL! The fetuses were the only redeeming part of the othrwise inane piece of drivel!
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