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Daddy's Little Girl (Free verse) by Chazie

As he went to touch her face, He whispered "how did I ever let you leave this place?" He touched her hand Shed a tear Now he knows He understands Her lips were red Her eyes were shut A little pink pillow to rest her head Her body was Silent Her soul was gone In her Coffin Very content A father without his heart in his world A daddy without his little girl.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-Oct-03/6:02 AM
Well that's a fucking surprise, isn't it? Especially when you consider the fact that you have the same IP address as the author, the same age, the same gender, and you both describe yourselves as "very laid back and open-minded" people. You are either the same person, or twins, or just very close friends. Did you really cry? I mean *REALLY*? You actually started crying when you read this piece? *ACTUALLY*? YOU DEFINITELY DID ACTUALLY START CRYING? (Before you answer, I'd like to take this opportunity to remind you that lying is a sin and Jesu will make you suffer like a dog if you tell a lie. Thanks) -10-




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