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The Nude (Free verse) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.

I think its rude to be nude But maybe I'm just afraid? Afraid to be nude? No you idiot! It is you who is the one who is nude. Not me.

ARTIE 10-Oct-03/7:34 PM
One has only to read [most of] the string of comments above to realize that DA's third verse is the genius that confused, then offended and then inspired all of you to quickly "pull your open blouses closed" thereby revealing your own prudish personal brawl, the subliminal "clothing" that protects the spew of your ment. DA mocked - and won. That ot to be wth a tn.




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