Shuushin9 Oct 2003

Pretty awesome, really.

should be "heart[']s" I think tho.

None of the rhyming seems forced, which is cool.

If you are so moved, maybe you could consider replacing the second "the 3 words" with "them"? It might just be me, but I felt distracted by the duplication (as if I was missing something, thinking "it must be so for a reason").