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My Instructions or My Tongue In My Cheek? (Free verse) by Patsy

Do not visit me in the afternoon. i will associate you with Sunday Jazz and think you pretentious, obvious, blatantly announced. If you visit in the evening, i expect you will have something any one thing to show for yourself bring me a husk, a cirrus, a knoll, then bring on the twilight. Visit me at night, i will be glad, i will give you keys if you give me a constellation (but do make sure it's new, i can't stand them hand-to-hand). Visit me early. Sensing news, i will regard you as the sun and receive you accordingly. Unsure of appropriate tributes to such such a guest, i promise to feed you and fill you up with my dreams.

SupremeDreamer 8-Oct-03/12:32 AM
quite good, id say. blessed with 9.




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