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Why You All Suck (Ode) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?

Your poems disgust me, your lyrics alarm, I tire of your tedious psalms, Even my gran could do better than that, And she hasn't got any arms.

Shuushin 7-Oct-03/8:37 AM
excuse me, but it should be "...[aint] got [no] arms."

It's actually a good start to something (I can think of many more reasons why you/we all suck). And, well, it kinda rhymes - so it must be good.




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