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silent struggle (Free verse) by princesszoe

as i sing words drip like tears from the depth of me i look in your eyes, so dampen deep and blue and wonder what is down there, in you i try to touch hard with my deepest heart which bounces off unnoticed my smallest is contained in you, owned no less for my silence i protest with screams suppressed too often still with buoyant heart i slice from me and serve it straight to you

sliver 7-Oct-03/7:19 AM
Deeply felt emotion still swirling down there with the source of your tears. I especially like the 'slice of my heart' part (look! I'm a poet too!)yipee.




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