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Blissful the Fungae Forest (Free verse) by peaceseeker

curls and lemon lime raincoat caught leaves on the fly before they landed flight so absorbed in the catch a reunion like a leaf landing daughter in stripes and flowers ran with arms straight up through the mountain valley blissful the fungae forest meaty mushrooms so tempting led to granite stepping stairs climbed to several summits feasted like we earned it photographed the ethereal day in the clouds in the mist

http://mulberryfairy 6-Oct-03/8:54 AM
One of your best. I loved the title and the description of the leaf catching- my daughter says it is good luck to catch one in the air. You ought to submit to CBW.




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