poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Behind the veil by INTRANSIT.

<~>6 Oct 2003

"Lo, had the blankest of cold stares"

huh?

lo--how are you using this?
it generally means 'look at that' or 'over there, look!'

also, use a comma or a colon instead of ellipsis, and fix the apostrophe: Ireland's