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Wanting (Free verse) by J.B. Manning

I long to see your face To taste If nothing else The pleasure of your insult I yearn to touch your skin To walk with you To once again Speak of nothing and everything between us I dare to flow You know The words I need to show To you To me To set again my soul so free Walk with me into yesterday or tomorrow But never today Because it’s cold here And I much prefer the beach I am cheap You say Or want to say But not so much as the movie Or the play So you stay Away

?-Dave_Mysterious-? 6-Oct-03/5:16 AM
My opinions about your poetry are entirely contained within my remarks. Therefore, if you don't like my remarks, you don't like my opinions about your poetry. If you can't accept some criticism, you'll never develop as a poet. I can understand your stupidity, but I can't eggscuse your arrogance.

Also, you can't make your comments more true by writing Yiddish at the end of them.




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