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Aluminum Shackles - Titanium Quills (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

- Did you- Did you, and I repeat, DID YOU insinuate That these words were spilled from my veins in order to make clear to you - the reader what exactly I am communicating in verse and thought? Are you suggesting that me, the poet, has wrists that are enshackled, forbidden to choose obscurity since you no longer enjoy the subtle art of mystery and the game of uncovering secrets laid within these words? I know no rules, abide none but the ancient law of pen and consiousness. I challenge my fingers and the eyes of others- offering variety and color. Pabulum is abhorred by you and your kind, and I am left only to speak thus: My inkblade detests the lazy and those whose insight only glances upon the faces of words, which always require thought and penetrating vision to truly savour the poetic soup that I am known to boil and serve. Ah, and another thing: My inkblade adores bleeding those that encourage slavery. May you be blessed in being taught that words no matter how presented and crafted- can never fully communicate what a penmaster intends, since it is created usually for more than one pair of eyes. And many like you are comfortable in the common act of assumption. Which is why I am comfortably cantankerous- a cherished tradition among many who weild Titanium Pens. Amen.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Oct-03/11:09 AM
Have you committed "Real censorship"? The answer is "yes". Therefore your original remark was complete bollocks just as I said. Shall we move on?

The thing I find so extraordinary about you is that whenever I question one of your actions - such as deleting my comments or randomly inserting the word "cuisine" into your work - you instantly jump on the defensive accusing me of sulking or making up convoluted reports of foulplay or spouting hot air or being stubborn or whatever, and then, after a little thought, you say that actually the word "cuisine" shouldn't have been there afterall, that you are indeed guilty of censorship and that it doesn't really look good for you, that you've had your fair share of comment deletions and now it's your turn, etc. And when I ask you why you did these things the answer is: -shrug-, or "I don't give a shit what I do", or "It's the drugs, man".

So in light of such excellent and well-thought-out motives, can you really blame me for questioning your actions? The answer is "no".




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