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the wire (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

my resources are limited entangled by my own unwinding threads I have studied the effects of thirst firsthand and dug up pipebombs from the playground I have run my finger over this bundle again and again red black green, yellow and blue felt in the dark for a pair of pliers found a hand instead found you

Thissitestinks 1-Oct-03/8:06 PM
"I have studied the effects of thirst
firsthand

and dug up pipebombs
from the playground" Nice word play, it's really a stunning piece.




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