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blue lilac and I (edit) (Free verse) by richa

sitting by the stream silvered in pike, and picking from still air the e-minor of trombone I could see the craned neck of blue lilac in shade bowl faced to the sun like a beggar, so succinctly put was its life and mine

Thissitestinks 1-Oct-03/7:59 PM
Now that's poetry. Very nice indeed! ;)"bowl faced to the sun
like a beggar,

so succinctly put

was its life and mine" Well put!




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