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Wanting (Free verse) by J.B. Manning

I long to see your face To taste If nothing else The pleasure of your insult I yearn to touch your skin To walk with you To once again Speak of nothing and everything between us I dare to flow You know The words I need to show To you To me To set again my soul so free Walk with me into yesterday or tomorrow But never today Because it’s cold here And I much prefer the beach I am cheap You say Or want to say But not so much as the movie Or the play So you stay Away

J.B. Manning 1-Oct-03/3:37 PM
No, if you would have read my paragraph CORRECTLY fuck hole, you would see that I don't CARE about you liking or disliking my poetry. What I CARE about is your remarks. I value peoples comments for the sake of improvement, but after reading some of your so-called poetry, I realized that there is no improvement in your tired ass ghetto complaints. Same song, different drum, beating everyday in some tired old slum. yadda yadda yadda.




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