Sigh'ense...30 Jul 2002

it makes you think, but in my opinion( if itmatters at all) it needs more poess and exclusiveness. in other words, " it would be better if the beginning line was developed possibly or if there was more of a revelation in its conclusion, like I've gathered you were shooting for.. anywayz, maybe both would help.
just a though, Da1.and feel free to disect in contrivence over my work, i would be honored.