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Wanting (Free verse) by J.B. Manning

I long to see your face To taste If nothing else The pleasure of your insult I yearn to touch your skin To walk with you To once again Speak of nothing and everything between us I dare to flow You know The words I need to show To you To me To set again my soul so free Walk with me into yesterday or tomorrow But never today Because it’s cold here And I much prefer the beach I am cheap You say Or want to say But not so much as the movie Or the play So you stay Away

J.B. Manning 30-Sep-03/9:23 AM
No, I don't care if you like it or not, but you always manage some trite remark about everything, which I don't think is necessary. It seems that a lot of the regulars on this site are pretty freaking stuck on themselves or maybe you're all just totally insecure in your lives and this site is the only place where you can take out your arrogant frustrations on people, either way, it's unbecoming of intelligent people, if you ask me.Why don't you try offering suggestions of improvement if you see room for some? If you're such an expert.




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