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EGG (Sonnet) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?

Egg, Egg, Egg, Egg, Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeegggggggggggg!

?-Dave_Mysterious-? 29-Sep-03/3:53 PM
Ideally there would be about 10 different cases so I could represent the slow, descending tone of the final "egg". Like if you were shouting "noooooooooooooooo..." as you dived out into the road in slow motion to save your disabled son from being run over by a lorry.




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