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EGG (Sonnet) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?

Egg, Egg, Egg, Egg, Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeegggggggggggg!

INTRANSIT 29-Sep-03/3:37 PM
I think your caps should be in the middle of line three, giving it somewhat of an arc. Like a small girl grossed out and sqealing. funny funny funny.




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