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Love doggerel (Free verse) by thavimatola

Lyra is as slow to woo, As halon is to fission. But her kiss inspires you As liquor does elision. These attributes will make you do The things she says you can't, Like an erring worker who Comes drunk to the nuclear plant.

richa 29-Sep-03/1:34 PM
Like it, especially the refreshing rhymes in the first verse




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