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Love doggerel
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Free verse
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thavimatola
Lyra is as slow to woo, As halon is to fission. But her kiss inspires you As liquor does elision. These attributes will make you do The things she says you can't, Like an erring worker who Comes drunk to the nuclear plant.
thavimatola
29-Sep-03/11:52 AM
Points of possible confusion: (1) Doggerel is bad verse. (2) halon doesn't fission easily; fission is a nuclear process. (3) elision is a technical word for slurring.
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