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Wasted Words
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Free verse
) by
ho_hum
Why, are words so freely given? Too many syllables, squeezed, like unwilling breasts into an undersized bra, Into lines to small to accommodate them. The result equally uncomfortable and unappealing. Observe the competent poet Not a word is wasted.
ho_hum
29-Sep-03/1:50 AM
Commas
Perhaps too many
Perhaps poorly applied.
But so preferable
To excessive use
Of line breaks
For the same purpose.
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