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Life's Work (Free verse) by baughworm

“Many spend their entire lives searching for enlightenment, I like to spend my time Leading others away from it.” I received a quite cumbersome Shovel at birth, With which I was to Begin work on my grave Immediately. As of yet I have not started, For the shovel is rather heavy. Instead I used it to plant a tree, In hopes that some poor sod Will be seduced by its leaves and fruits, flowers and abundant bees To pick up a shovel of his own and Start digging.

?-Dave_Mysterious-? 26-Sep-03/4:37 PM
The second verse is quite excellent, but then it got a bit soppy.




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