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Wasted Words (Free verse) by ho_hum

Why, are words so freely given? Too many syllables, squeezed, like unwilling breasts into an undersized bra, Into lines to small to accommodate them. The result equally uncomfortable and unappealing. Observe the competent poet Not a word is wasted.

richa 26-Sep-03/2:25 PM
the last line I think is wasted, as it has been explained in the rest of the poem.

the breasts into an undersized bra, unwilling?
anthropomorphism?




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