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Leaving (Free verse) by Pervy Elf

To you this may mean nothing, but to me: Everything. I'm left aching for your presence, your touch, everytime you leave- Me. Leave me. For somebody other (better) than me. I hope you are happy. Happy with her. Beacuse this time; this time I'm going to leave- You. Leave you. For somebody other (better) than you. And this time; this time I'll finally be happy. Without you.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 25-Sep-03/12:18 PM
Wow, you must have so much burning rage and pure beautiful energy if you couldn't post without holding something back. It's obvious that the only thing you're holding back is a silly temper tantrum about your parents/boyfriend/best friend "betraying" you, so while you aren't going to offend anyone by posting it here, you'll just upset yourself in the long run when nobody fucking likes it. Thanks!

Your friend,
doug




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