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Leaving (Free verse) by Pervy Elf

To you this may mean nothing, but to me: Everything. I'm left aching for your presence, your touch, everytime you leave- Me. Leave me. For somebody other (better) than me. I hope you are happy. Happy with her. Beacuse this time; this time I'm going to leave- You. Leave you. For somebody other (better) than you. And this time; this time I'll finally be happy. Without you.

sliver 24-Sep-03/10:37 PM
Damn. Well, still some problems,(spelling/typo's) That,s why you read it before you submit. Iliked it better then the other, so 8.




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