Geschäftsreise23 Sep 2003

Went in grey and came out shiny black. Yum! (you even spelled 'grey'in the Geschäftsreise approved manner!) Lovely.

I would change the title, though, to 'Went Out Shiny Black' or something. The poem is much more about him than you, and the title doesn't show it, I think.

Perhaps you need to write a separate poem about how this made you feel and name that poem 'Alone With Memories'.