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minotaur (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub

keep one hand on the wall and turn to face the bull this child of ancient curse did work the daedalus machine and found you tugging thread all through these hidden halls keep in mind this thing is part man part bull and part maze

ecargo 23-Sep-03/7:26 AM
"Did work the daedalus machine"? (I know daedalus built the maze, but seems an odd way to put it.) Keenly rendered, B.Z.B., but it seems more poem fragment than poem.




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