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Untitled (A Dark Angel Litmus) (Free verse) by Geschäftsreise

'hello, my name is...' cock ramsey and the love I feel for you just can’t be true i cannot write another word but feel ensured that this life is one step closer to death Just a breath AA A Bbreath B CCloser C to Ddeath D he looks at you with care and doesn’t dare tell you that your [sic] gorgeous… because he’s poor; just… a vagabond… in a pit of despair… with nowhere… to go… it impossible to get a perfect score on DA’s comments (what a whore) it’s impossible not to rhyme and have aabb all the time if I had just one wish… a damascene fish… a methadone danish… a stylish swedish monish… where would I go without you? the man won’t let me near you… my friends can’t stand to see you… a unicorn’s life… oh, the strife… of my life… ‘oh these little earthquakes here we go again oh these little earthquakes doesn't take much to rip us into pieces’ i put my faith in God… and his righteous rod… because he knows what is best above all the rest love… you wouldn’t understand it like I do love… you couldn’t appreciate it like I do love… you shoudn’t claim to feel it as deeply as I do love… only women truly understand it because the power of women is strong stronger than the power of hate stronger than time stronger than memories stronger than poemranker which sucks anyway and that is why I am leaving because no one ever cares or responds to the poems that I think are really really very very good you all suck ;) jk lol i think i’ll look back on these days and yearn deeply for them when I am old and more sentimental than i am now but not today perfect minus one or two a wonderful playground of fun: for the entire cock ramsey pantheon

ecargo 22-Sep-03/3:52 PM
Thanks for the clarification--and the checkliste. It is magnificent and a true public service.




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