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Janine (a set of haikus) (Haiku) by capachijim

Your serenity, The grace that makes me want more, More of what I love. The prettiest one, Everyone meets in their life, That captures them so. My privation, My own inamorata, In whom I confine. Let us become one, So that a zephyr of love, Can finally veil.

daniella 20-Sep-03/9:21 PM
that would be 4 haikus for the price of one. and you seem to have done pretty well, despite the adverse tone in the commentaries... keep it up!




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