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I Hate You (Free verse) by mytenderrage

I despise you. You took my heart, And ripped it in to shreds. Until there was nothing left. I detest you. You stabbed my chest Until my blood flowed out Into a puddle of crimson Beneath my aching figure. Until there was a hole Of emptiness within My abused body, Helpless and hopeless, Cold and dead. You had offered me warmth, But I was so na??ve. I believed you. I wanted you. I did not anticipate All this pain All this hurt. You went away With hardly a farewell. How dare you go And leave me all alone? I am so lonely, I need someone. I hate you, I hate you. You hurt me the most When you didn???t mean to. I hate you, I hate you. You left my life forever, With barely a farewell. I hate you, I hate you. I hate you because I love you.

Blugirl16 29-Jul-02/9:47 PM
to dark angel:Yea hi i just read your comments on raven 18's poem,and WHAT THE HELL IS UP YOUR ASS!?!?!I mean sure she wrote the same ole thing but you dont have to call her a fucking whore,just because her boyfriend dumped her.Thats just fucked up,your one big prick did you know that,i mean you are one fucked up person.I think that you are only hiding your insecurities by bitching at people about their insecurities and their flaws to make you seem better than them.You are a peice of shit that we have to listen to.And dont you dare bitch at me cuz you know what im just not in the mood for anyones shit.
to raven 18:dont listen to his shit,im on your side :)




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