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I am one (Other) by red

Morning sun you pull me from the place where, i am one. You take me in, the form I came and i fall back, just like the rain.

Sent away by mommy 20-Sep-03/12:47 PM
It's light, fluffy and melts in my mouth.

take out the word 'the' in the last line.




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