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I Hate You (Free verse) by mytenderrage

I despise you. You took my heart, And ripped it in to shreds. Until there was nothing left. I detest you. You stabbed my chest Until my blood flowed out Into a puddle of crimson Beneath my aching figure. Until there was a hole Of emptiness within My abused body, Helpless and hopeless, Cold and dead. You had offered me warmth, But I was so na??ve. I believed you. I wanted you. I did not anticipate All this pain All this hurt. You went away With hardly a farewell. How dare you go And leave me all alone? I am so lonely, I need someone. I hate you, I hate you. You hurt me the most When you didn???t mean to. I hate you, I hate you. You left my life forever, With barely a farewell. I hate you, I hate you. I hate you because I love you.

-=SeTTle=- 29-Jul-02/9:26 PM
P.S.: DarkAngel hates you./ DarkAngel hates you./ DarkAngel hates you because he loves you. Furthermore, DA AND RAVEN SITTIN' IN A TREE, KAY EYE ESS ESS EYE EN GEE. FIRST COMES LOVE, THEN COMES MARRAIGE, THEN COMES A DEMENTED BABY WITH BAD TEETH AND BAD LUCK WITH THE OPPOSITE GENDER, NOT TO MENTION A PROPENSITY FOR THE ARGUING ARTS IN THE BABY CARRAIGE.




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