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Ah! That Love Would'st Lead Me (Concrete) by EggbertShootsFire

Ah! That Love would'st lead me Down these garden paths in May Entwining fingers passing 'Tween hazy fleurs flourishing On a blurred and xanthene day. Yet rather than that lovely visage I've been gone and lead astray; Afore these hours waking I've no gentle whispers speaking Save my heart, in sad dismay. Ah! That Love would keep me From Her torturing wing of thorns- And the silent, fevered shadow 'Neath her brilliant-seeming halo, Viewed solely by a love forlorn. And would that I could leave him! He, whose tone has pierced me through; Clad in white and softly smiling, With my tender heart left writhing, As these shameless tears renew. Ah! That Love would'st lead me Toward His wond'rous arms outspread- But alas; this springtide's turned, And this lovely May's adjourned With December in its stead.

horus8 29-Jul-02/7:48 PM
p.s you do not shoot fire, eggbert, you shoot kale fluffy green kale into the iguana aquariums at a petco somewhere in fallon,nv. you have a hang-nail that never goes away, and your mother would make you wear the hush-puppies with the scuff proof toes (almost until sixth grade) your dad works at the ford plant. and your brother has been giving you wedgies since you can remember for no particular reason other than the fact that you are a "hopeless romantic" that will never get laid cuz u sound like a self righteous twit. the more well read you try to sound, the more comic book you display. "Look down", see that? thats my hoof mocking your sugar shorts.o




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