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Emotion Expression (Free verse) by Hostileintent

I am man of too many words, I blurt it all out, sometimes it slurs, It’s got me in trouble; it has been a spur, To prick the sides of a woman’s anger. In spite of what I many say, to this woman, this dove, The truth is my dear; it has always been love, I know it’s been hard; it has also been tough, I’m so sorry if I acted, like a brute or a rough. For quite a while, I have felt very weird, Whenever this beauty was anywhere near, For manys the time, my emotion was feared, For my emotion always ends in hollowed tears. But no matter how hard I fought, it ended up done, And she was the person, who had finally won, And it didn’t matter at all, if I was to run, All because with this lady, I had fallen in love. Babe I wanted to say it, but I was afraid, Because for emotion expression, I was not made, I know I have been blunt, through you I did wade, But I wanted to hide it, the emotion, afraid. That’s no excuse, no reason at all, But babe, for me, emotion always brings a fall, Then I met you, and you changed it all, Time, time, time, it was like a wall. What I am trying to say to you, in my primitive way, Is that babe you changed it, my outlook on life, I couldn’t deal with it, like a man, So at times I was a jerk, an insensitive, ignorant jerk. The feelings I have for you babe, fill me inside, I tried to cover them, for I thought I had pride, The truth is that expression, is harder than to hide, Don’t hate me babe, I always meant well, Don’t hate me babe, not you as well

Don-Quixote 19-Sep-03/7:41 AM
open up.. or shrivel inwards, become dry and cracked: a mummy waiting to turn to dust.

my mother had the same kind of problem.. unable to express emotion.

The woman never looked happy (unless it was a dinner party, she was an A+ actor.. not many had a fucking clue)

blessed with eight.




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