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Boys with Guns (Free verse) by Hostileintent

Have you ever seen a picture A picture taken of a child A child with a gun, who has never seen the fun The fun that the gun deprived Have you ever seen a picture A picture taken for To show the Grotesque Obscenity The Obscenity Grotesque, the Grotesque Obscenity of war Who ever heard of the boy soldier Those essential elements of war Disgusting, Disgusting. I’m Disgusted. Disgusting The Grotesque Obscenity of war Have you ever seen a picture Of a boy, without a home A picture, a boy, no home- a war The Grotesque Obscenity of war

?-Dave_Mysterious-? 19-Sep-03/7:36 AM
Before I read your poem, I thought war was quite a good idea, but now I'm really against it.




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