poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Boys with Guns by Hostileintent.

Don-Quixote19 Sep 2003

I have heard of, and have seen such a picture.. not pleasant.

the repetition makes it seem like your starting to stammer, as if gripped by anxiety or nervouseness.. at first i thought it out of place, but then you mentioned that you lived in such a place, and it made sense..

was that the purpose? or was it simply done to give more force to emotion? (im all curiouse this morning)

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