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Addiction causing stupidity (Free verse) by LuckyJoe

Ring finger bonds sensation in matrimony, The caress of brassily hair, Silken to the touch. Addiction, its time to feed, Placing between fingers death soon to be lit. Thoughts going by faster than light, A young mind so bright. The light bulb long ago shot its spring, Darkness and dimming shadows did come. The thoughts still race at ungodly speeds, But from one to another they reflect, Thought has since lacked being direct. The warrior; stupidity, On the battle field of friends, Showing total neglect. A wage war on you! Stupid mind… You are mine!

DreamerSupreme 18-Sep-03/3:58 PM
well.. your writing convinces me that you are not in possesion of the ability to handle intoxicants.. my ole poem:

stupid after drugs, means you
were a good actor
before meeting your wife,
who is more charming than you are

:)

lucky.. why do you feel that adding all this extra wrapping paper will make the stupid message look pretty? it looks stupid, makes little sense, and everyone with eyes can see that your layin the bullshit HEAVY.. it stinks.. shovel it. 3




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