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Strung Out On Sunlight (Free verse) by J.B. Manning

I haven’t slept in days Everything seems so far away Except for dreams Nightmares maybe A dog barks in the distance It’s echo sparks a series of hallucinations Like lying my face on a fault line People pass me on the street I blink away their movements Light gives me a migraine And everything’s the same A melting pot of puke and twisted fait A crack on the sidewalk reminds me of some grand adventure That I never really had I’ve reinvented myself so many times I can’t remember my own name It’s 3am on Monday or maybe Thursday of next week Time is linear and I blink away its movements

DreamerSupreme 18-Sep-03/12:46 PM
you forgot to mention voices, multi-character thought patterns, and the strange sudden urge to destroy furniture.

good though. i can tell you actually had some experience with sleep dep and meth.




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