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Man & Woman (Haiku) by Mona Lisa

All women want hugs Some men just want what follows, What follows......neither !

richa 18-Sep-03/12:05 PM
the 6-7-6 one was better.

Now the first line sounds like all women rather than all they want.

And the third destroys the flow a bit.

Sorry I couldn't help, maybe if you put the first version on and asked for help someone might have an idea




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