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Man & Woman (Haiku) by Mona Lisa

All women want hugs Some men just want what follows, What follows......neither !

richa 18-Sep-03/11:20 AM
I prefer the first one even though it was not strictly a haiku. (3rd line what follows is neither)

As for 'all women', I did think that was a bit generalist. But the power of this poem is its logic how the 3rd line concludes the premises of 1 and 2.

Sorry I can't help




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