poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on reflexion - dayspring to dusk (second version) by Don-Quixote.

DreamerSupreme18 Sep 2003

there might be a few more rewrites, the original has been.. well, mysterious. Im not sure what i intended it to mean/say when i wrote it, but i am unraveling it via rewrite, etc..

its strange when i start writing poems i dont fully comprehend, it always bugs me when i go back and go over such poems.