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reflexion - dayspring to dusk (second version) (Free verse) by Don-Quixote

you are dreamer, sleepwalking with sword, piercing the center of the stream, dousing the seed. drinking hour, immersed in the waters of life but breath will not come about. friction causes explosion dream made real, life pullulates and spreads visions blossom from sprout.

DreamerSupreme 18-Sep-03/9:52 AM
there might be a few more rewrites, the original has been.. well, mysterious. Im not sure what i intended it to mean/say when i wrote it, but i am unraveling it via rewrite, etc..

its strange when i start writing poems i dont fully comprehend, it always bugs me when i go back and go over such poems.




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