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reflexion - dayspring to dusk (Free verse) by DreamerSupreme

you are dreamer, sleeping and walking across the sword long and keen, piercing the center of the stream, pullulating dampening the bloody rocks where silence lay. vibration triggering explosion illusion made real, visions blossom from flower. drinking hour, immersed in the waters of life but breath will not come about.

nentwined 17-Sep-03/6:24 PM
pullulating?

has a good tone/rhtyhm/feel. 8.




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