Replying to a comment on:

Up for a game? (Free verse) by LuckyJoe

Dazing off in pure entertainment, A belt sea sawing, the pivot an index finger, Not paying attention to the conversation around, All that matters is this simple thing. Attached to the belt a circular case, The minds embrace encased, Time for the unleashing has come. Unzip releasing the demons cage, Two unite as one, A cue stick, their favorite toy. “Up for a game ten or twenty a rack?”

nentwined 17-Sep-03/6:21 PM
cute imagery, flow I think could make this really nice. 7.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001