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empty (Free verse) by timvick473662003

Life is such a bore knowing all is for loss hiding in the shadows afraid of them all everyone is staring although no one is around holding on to nothing although it seems like everything a devestating loss but not a loss compared to what u have alone and with nothing i enter alone and with nothing shall i leave

nentwined 14-Sep-03/7:45 PM
"staring" not "starring".

a common theme. This doesn't stand out for me.

though a bit of curiousity in "hiding in the shadows" and being afraid of "them all" (the shadows you're hiding in, or all the staring people that aren't there?)




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