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If I Wrote The Perfect Poem (Free verse) by toward

if I could write the perfect poem paint my dreams with rich colors, in vivid detail wrench the demons from my darkest recesses my life and thoughts in eloquent relief if I could do all this surely my life would be fixed peace, satisfaction, and fulfillment would blossom like clover temptation would wither and return to dust frustration would melt and evaporate just writing it down would be enough just getting it out would make it real if I wrote of a tropical paradise and blissful love I would be set there forever more if I sketched a path forward for those I love our blessings would be manifest if I enumerated human weakness we would be healed if I could write the perfect poem maybe everything would be better in the meantime I'll keep typing to amuse myself and unload some baggage maybe I'll stumble over perfection on the way

LuckyJoe 12-Sep-03/1:33 PM
in the meantime
I'll keep typing
to amuse myself
and unload some baggage

maybe I'll stumble over perfection on the way
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That sums up what I've been reading in editors notes lately. A lot of editors say that poetry is getting longer and dragging on with everyone typing this day and age. Its just so easy for them to keep typing and typing I've found it to be true. Its all to easy to just keep going. It was never like that when I was hand writing everything.

I believe the poem would say as much if not more taking the lines from above totally out of it. Or maybe...

In the meantime
I'll keep working towards perfection,
Perhaps stumble upon it along the way.




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