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Fridge (Free verse) by Birdpia

Days by days, I could see the winter was getting colder, As outside was raining snow heavily.. Nights by nights, Besides the loneliness accompanying me, The breeze was making me remember, All the things I wished I could forget.. As the snow dropped, Courage inside myself was increasing, Because I felt I was back to the days I longed the most That's when you lied on my shoulders before the fridge As the snow vanished, The winter went to call the spring, To show off all the green leaves you love most.. When I dreamt of you so much, When I missed you so much, I would go back to the fridge, Waiting for the next winter..

Shardik 11-Sep-03/7:38 PM
Yes, the dark one sums it up beautifully, I do confess.




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