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Lets Do Lunch (At Ground Zero) (Haiku) by scitz

Child eats his ‘Big Mac’ Sitting on a mass grave, Getting fat like Jews.

razorgrin 11-Sep-03/9:18 AM
The rant rated a 2, but the senryu gets 7.




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