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Why Stay? (Free verse) by LuckyJoe

Entombed in an icy grave, Through the frozen crystal, Looking up into the void sky, Breath shallow wishing to die, Encased emotion due to devotion, Worry no longer of her pain, It is her who drives you insane.

SupremeDreamer 10-Sep-03/10:06 AM
tomb/grave same thing.
"wishing to die"
"drives you insane".... etc. you were saying?




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