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The empty room (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I was invited to heaven and saw Jesus there. He held his face in his hands, he was sobbing. Gray and matted was his hair. I said: "Jesus? What is wrong?" He said: "I don't know, nobody stays." And then he sent me away.

Thissitestinks 8-Sep-03/10:25 PM
"Doesn't sound like something Jesus would do. Must have been a bad day. Even the greatest philanthropists have their moments of self-doubt."
I agree...I do like away better than comes as well. :)




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